Tuesday, September 14, 2010

Last and Final thoughts

Hello fellow classmate and professor:

This has been a great 10 weeks, it just went to fast. There are still a lot of thing I would like to learn about writing. There are still more to writing then just typing of a research paper. It’s a lot of information that you have to gather up and look for when it comes to a paper. I have learned a lot form college Composition 1 & 2. With writing to me it still doesn’t come that easy at all. When I gather my information it still takes time to do the paper, and make the paper make so since. But this over all experience has been great.

The advice I give to a person when it come to their first time writing a paper is that: make sure that you gather all information, read the information that you have found. In that information pick out the main points that you want to write about. Pick out the most important things that would stand out in your paper. When you have all your facts and have brainstorm on what you going to write about then you start on your paper.

The area that I have strengthened in was gathering all my information, doing research on everything. It took a little time with getting everything together and makes it make some since. The seminar really helps out with everything, because the professor broke it down for us. How the paper suppose to be wrote, where the information need to go. With the information in doc sharing tell us how to do APA format help a little bit.
The area that I need help on is: APA format is still something that I need to work on still; I think I have most part of it but I can do better. I just thought you write paper up and that was it. Well that how we were taught in high school, but when I came to Kaplan everything in writing has changed. I learn an all new expected of writing.

My final thought’s this was a wonderful class and I have learned a lot about writing. I hope everyone enjoy the rest of their time with Kaplan and have a great success!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
P.S. I still be checking my blogger if anyone want to cheat sometimes or keep in touch


~God bless~

Friday, September 3, 2010

Unit 9

My paper is almost done but not finish yet, I still have a lot of work to do on it. I feel that my paper is okay but it’s not the best paper I don’t think. I feel like it’s still messing something in my paper, like something is not catching the reader’s eyes. I feel very nervous for the professor to read and grade my paper because I think it still needs work. I let three people read my paper and they said it sound good. I think I have accomplished some goal on my paper and in this class but me personnel I think I could down better.

I at this point I still think I need more learning in written because writing don’t come natural to me all. I think by taken these write classes it somewhat coming together for me, and I have learned a lot so far.
I’m still working on my paper; I haven’t turned it in yet. I’m writing about Teen’s overused texting and I thought that would be an easy paper to write about “but I was wrong”. The reason I thought it would be easy because that what’s going on in today society. By me looking up the research and everything that did come easy at all either, but I did find some reach that was going and interested.

My things that I did to get the information I look up everything read it and sum it up into a paper. The techniques work for me throughout the paper. I wrote the paper, proof read it, revised it, and changed some things round on the paper. I think over all it was and okay paper. The last minute thing that I done was let other people proof read my paper and tell me what they thought and I took to change some things in my paper. I will use all my writing skills that I have learn in the near future because that is a part of my career.

Monday, August 30, 2010

Unit 8

The course is about over and this writing paper is getting hard and hard for me because I’m trying to make this paper sound good. I have done my research and I have done everything. But it seem like I can’t get it to make since and make everything come together. When writing a paper is very hard for me because I can’t make it make since or make the paper come together at all. I feel great about the comments that the student has gave me because it gave me some idea on my paper. It helps me range my paper and take something out and put something’s in my paper. The students that gave me advice on my paper gave me some good advice it help me out a lot and it was very understanding.I plan on continue my blog after this class because I like to meet new friends.

But the overall class has been good so far, I have learn a lot about writing since I have been going to Kaplan University.

Monday, August 23, 2010

Unit 7

I feel that when it’s a good thing when peer reviews your paper because some can give you good come back on it. So peers can give you a better outlook then the teacher can. Most time it is very helpful.

My paper I had a lot of “Ah Ha” moments back when it comes to texting it just makes you laugh. Some of the research that I have read and found is true because in this today society this is was teens/adults are doing when it comes to texting.
I haven’t really found nothing shocking to my paper at all because I’m writing about something that is going on today and all of them things we are doing when it comes down to texting.

Tuesday, August 17, 2010

Hello my blogger friends, how everything going with everyone I hope all is well. Its going pretty good so far I really can’t’ complain about anything. I tell you this school work is turning into a beast it’s seem like the more I get done or try to get done, more home work comes along with it(lord).
I really enjoy going back to school and learning new thing and getting to study a lot of different things too. I’m going into health information technology and I did not know that it was so much stuff to learn about health. But at the end of the day it will be all worth it.

Just though I would share a little with you guys…. Have a bless week

Sunday, August 15, 2010

Outline

I put my outline on here because I'm hoping that some of you can help me out with my paper

Step 1:
1. Teenagers today are using text messaging more than ever before: Parents, guardians, are becoming more interested in the role of text messaging in the social lives of children. (intro)
2. Texting has became an epidemic among teens; inspiring dangerous behavior regression in proper usage of English and lack of common courtesy. (thesis)
3. Teens have been using text messaging to interact with each other in increasing ways.
4. Does this new way of communicating with peers helpful or harmful.
5. Regarding certain texting behaviors in which teens/ adult engage in.

Step 2:I think in my paper I find myself repeating the same thing. Or I’m saying the same thing but put it different.The topic that I choose was a good topic it’s just hard trying to get my point across and make sure I’m hit all the key point that needed to be touch on. I know what I want to say, I just don’t know how to word some of it